annotated comment maybe overlap W r i t i n g

i just send you the annotated first draft and there are so many comments from the professor, you have to open it in WORD or something, some annotated comment maybe overlap, if you can not see the comment please inform me.

The research paper should run between 12-15 pages (typed, double-spaced, and paginated, with proper citations and a bibliography). For the paper, students will have to consult a minimum of seven sources not counting the readings from the assigned materials for class. These can be books, book chapters, articles from scholarly journals, primary source materials or materials from authoritative web sites, such as the official U.S. State Department web site, the United Nations or NATO web site, etc. Magazines such as Time, Newsweek, and/or Economist may be consulted and cited, but cannot be part of the count for the minimum of seven scholarly resources. Proper citations (Author, title, publisher or journal title, page numbers, date/year and place of publication; if you are citing a chapter from an edited book, you need to cite the author of the chapter and the chapter title, page numbers of the chapter, and bibliographic details for the edited book) must be provided for all your sources. You must also choose an appropriate title for each paper and paginate your paper. Paper topics must be cleared with the instructor. Students will be required to submit a thesis statement, a bibliography, a first draft, and a final draft of the paper. The thesis statement should posit a clear link between the dependent variable (that which is being explained) and the independent variable(s) (factors used to explain the dependent variable. The posited causal link should derive from an established body of theoretical literature. Students will get feedback at all stages of the paper-writing process.

Use the APA format for citations and bibliography.